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A Poem by StacyPerry

Since I've been gone I heard that you've cried more then smiled,
Since I've been gone I heard that you've wanted to call and almost dialed
Since I've been gone I heard that you've lied to your lovers,
Since I've been gone I heard that you've hid under the covers
Since I've been gone I heard that you've wanted me, you really do,
Since I've been gone the one who's told me the prior is YOU.

© 2010 StacyPerry


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Poem is very good. I like the repetition also. Sometime we whisper secrets that may get us in more trouble. A very good poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is short yet wonderfully written! I like the repetition of "Since I've been gone," plus I really like the last line! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so powerful. Love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is powerful, such an enjoyable read

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Regretful, a nice piece hon xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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StacyPerry
StacyPerry

Ashtabula, OH



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