I'll Love You Till Death

This came out as a song when I typed it. I hope you can see that and catch the same tune in your head [and to help with the tune, check the new song by Apocalyptica S.O.S. (Anything But Love)].

I'm bound to you by the silence that we share,
I had to let you know and now that you're aware
Is there anything that you can do to set me free,
Or am I stuck in this twisted nightmare of loving you, but you not loving me
You're words are are in my brain as I could never forget you saying,
I love you, I hate you, I can not live without you, Do you know you are driving me insane??
There is no ending to your torture of treating me good then bad,
My heart strings are pulled every second and knowing we aren't together is making me sad
So why don't you tell me the truth with your discarded youth as we both age a little more,
Then tell me your drowning in all the love I give to you as you head for the door
I can't let go of anything,
I can't let go anymore........
So know that I am barely breathing with you so far gone,
I'm tired of holding my breath for you to come back to me and as of the break of dawn
I will be loving you and only you until death my dear,
I can't get you out of my mind and it hurts as the memories behind me I stare
So let this be the one true thing that came out of both of our pasts,
The love I have for you is not as simple as the stone you first cast
It is something that blinds us and sometimes reminds us of the things in this world that we can not let go,
So never forget me and never regret me as I shall hold on way too tight at times just to show
The only thing I can say that is left are the scars we both have from loving each other,
So today is the day that we try to start over as friends and not as lovers
Is it working for you, is there anything else I can do to make you happy in this time,
Is it sating you to know that you were the one responsible for losing my love addled mind??
I shall always love you 'till death, baby I will love you 'till death, know that I shall love you 'till death, be aware I'll love you 'till death.

Copyright 2010 [5-10-2010] Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

Heavey stuff Stacy Perry, but good stuff too. It is amazing how love/hate/love are so prevelant in our lives. you, me and most of the world. We need to know how to reward and not to expect. Expectations not met can be very painful, enjoying the moment can be quite rewarding.

[Lorraine]

I love the sacrificial love theme. It gives your piece a bittersweet approach without appearing too dramatic. I greatly admire the dedication and passion of your character. Very detailed narration.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Daisy123]

very deep, really made me think about how complex love can really be.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, I like this alot.
Very well written

[StacyPerry]

If you listen to Apocalyptica's new tune S.O.S. (Anything But Love) then you will catch on a bit. :o)

[Ruth]

Be interested to know what the tune is like:) xx

[StacyPerry]

This flowed out quickly to a tune in my head, thank you.

[Ruth]

This is a wonderful poem actually:) There is an indepth and vivid imagery running through here:) Nice work xx