Loving You, My Friend

Sometimes we just don't forget the people who have changed our lives whether it is for the better or for the worse.

There was a time,
There was a place
I saw your smile,
Upon your face
I think of you for hours on end,
You are the one my dearest friend
You held me tight and I held you back,
Who knew that you would bite and attack
I felt your venom and your cruel intentions,
Did I forget that I loved you or did I mention
How you once upon a time loved me too,
How did this happen, why am I blue??
That's right my friend you left me behind,
Now you call me names and at erratic times
I try to tell you that I love you still,
You say "sure you do" and I pick up the quill
I write my heart out on a page,
Too bad I am not the almighty sage
If I were I could tell what you were thinking,
Instead when I manage to spend time with you, you are drinking
Put the bottle down and listen to me,
Together forever, yes it could be!!
So I look at you and now concede,
Maybe your life I did impede
I stated I was sorry and that I do not regret,
Loving you my friend is something I will NEVER forget.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is heartfelt and sad. It is hard to fall from a relationship and be the one holding on. I felt the struggle and battle to be heard and to hold on. Last line is very true. Even the person leaving will know pain in time. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

I am moved by this one:) xx