Last Walk

Love Do NOT Die

She walks the night hand in hand,
Her lover beside her and their feet in the sand
They gaze at the moonlight that shines down,
Their smiles growing larger there's never a frown
They stop walking and stare into one anothers eyes,
They can see where the love for each other doth lie
Her lips part and the words "I love you" flow from them,
He  listens closely and  the same words come from him
They turn towards the ocean and walk into the water,
No looking back they continue in farther
With their last breath they know they'll be together forever,
As they perish hand in hand their love shall end, never.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

A very touching and lovely piece. Wonderful rhythm and rhyme. The imagery is beautiful and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this tragic poem. Thank you for entering it in my Tragicomedy contest... however... nothing about this poem is comic. It is sad and touches the heart but it doesn't make a single laugh utter from the lips. So you have half the requirements of the contest. Wonderful poem nonetheless, I'm glad you entered it so I could read it.

[Revolved]

This is so peaceful and just lovely. The rhymes are always my favorite and I love how you ended it. Wonderful writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. To die in the mist of love would be a story book ending. I like the gentle emotion and feeling of love in your words. A perfect ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Gomer LePoet]

Shakespear at his best, as you lie them down to their final rest. good job.

[GhostWoman]

I LOVE THIS!!! I'm, like, CRYING right now because of how deep this is.

[deeps]

Wow! This is so wonderful and ever so sincere
This is beuatiful. Your words just flow so lovely
down the page.