No Other Cares

Reaching out and touching your face,
There seems to be no time or space
I run my fingers down your cheek,
To the lips that I do seek
I move in for the kiss,
A chill hits me and it's pure bliss
As we move back and just stare,
We seem to have no other cares
As you know I love you so and that will always be.

Reviews

[GhostWoman]

I kind of don't see the point of the last line... well I do, but I think that it might've been better as "as I look into your soul and you into mine (next line) I'll never fell ever more fine" but that's just what I think. Please don't take any offense in my critisizem. lol can't spell that.

[Coyote Poetry]

When it is good. It is a damn good feeling. I like the poem. You took me in and described a very good moment. A outstanding poem. I like the ending.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is wonderful and sull of feelings.
Very well expressed and written

[Ruth]

Love can obliterate all the rubbish in your life! lol xx