Our First Kiss

7 years 3-27-2010

As we stood within the room,

Our thoughts were of smiles and not of gloom

We looked deep into each others eyes,

There were sparks that flew and a sigh

We moved closer as it felt like a magnetic pull,

Then we held on tight without a lull

As our lips touched there were past lives that flew by,

The room spun quick and our heart beats rise

The kiss was one of pure pleasure,

Our souls connected, a memory to treasure

To this day we are together,

Seven years strong and in love forever.

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

The firstkiss is always better than the last kiss. it is hard to find anything better than that first kiss.

[Ruth]

The first kiss, a way to bliss? lol The poem nicely wraps it up at the end too xx

[Coyote Poetry]

The first kisses are the days remember forever. I like the gentle and kind feel of this poem. I like the ending too. Reward of a good love is many years of happiness. A outstanding poem.
coyote