First I Had To Die

Another Vampire Poem

The freeze of air hits my skin,

I feel the shaking from within

The breath I have grows very rapid,

Short and slow, it holds me captive

Then it ends, no more intake,

I am dead now for goodness sake

A gasp and my eyes shoot open,

'What the hell happened' is my first notion

I look around with my new eyes,

I see clearly through no disguise

I arise and gaze into the sky,

Vibrant beauty is seen by me, to bad first I had to die.

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

the ending is so majestic..........great development of thought....