Irony

From 2009

Irony

I'm always your parent, but never your child,
I'm always your enemy but never your friend
I'm always your twin, but never like you,
I'm always your sidekick but never beside you
I'm always your life, but I never do exist,
I'm always your breath but never breathing,
I'm always the two pieces of you, hell we should get a ring.

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

different style for you. I like the change of pace.

[Ruth]

There always contradictions in life lol Great work xx

[deeps]

I like this write alot. This is amazing.

[Marximilien]

It's really ironic. But the fifth line really doesn't sound good to me. I'm not used to people using that kind of speech ("do not never"). I know what you meant by that line but there are circumstances where that way of speaking can confuse readers.

[Coyote Poetry]

Is this a offer of a long time relationship in your words at the end? I like the poem. Story was good. Pace and flow of words made poem fun to read. Thank you.
Coyote