The Hanging

"Friends..."

Time will tell all of your secrets,
Time will tell all of your lost
Time will tell all of your loves,
Time will tell how much you cost
When you see how much you hurt me,
Time will tell all of your tears
When you see how you were the key,
Time will tell all of your cares
If you could open your eyes up wide,
Time would tell of all your dares
If you could swallow all your pride,
Time would tell of all you fears
Never worry what they shall reveal as time will tell if you can't cope,
Don't you see that in the ending time will lesson as you hang yourself with the rope.

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

A strong poem with so much to say. Great!

[Black Cat Fever]

A very intense write. Time does reveal all but sometimes we can't or don't want to see what Time reveals. The ending is true but rather dark. Sometimes people do chose to end their Time on earth that way.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very powerful. We can choke ourselves with stories and lies. A very good poem. The poem is strong and to the point. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[zombiikillah666]

this is really good.
flows good,
and was intense to read.
great job. (:

[Tate Morgan]

OOOOOOH Thats tough

[Wicahpi]

Sometimes we can't help but hang our own selves;
or trip our own selves up.
I like it.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I adore the repetition used in this poem; this writing contains such beautiful philosophy. Very strong poem, with a great rhyme and flow. Yet again, another amazing poem Stacey, well done-keep on writing!