Sick Santa

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He made his way from roof to roof,

The man would vanish with a poof

Then re-appear with a slight grin,

The man in red was a true sin

He'd fill the stockings and place the toys,

He then vanish prior to the waking of the girls and boys

As the kids came down on Christmas Eve night,

They screamed in horror at what was in their sight

Blood soaked heads and ravaged parts,

Santa had even left them fresh hearts

The children stared without blinking an eye,

They knew that Santa wouldn't lie

Then the children smiled at one another,

As they knew no one could harm them, not Father nor Mother.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a spooky Santa story. kids were a bit on the crazy side too. I like the story. Need a loco Santa once in a while. A very good poem. Made me smile this early morning.
Coyote

[GhostWoman]

Hm... kinda, how do I say it... weird? But still pretty damn good.

[deeps]

Whoa! This is cool,
I really enjoyed this.
Amazing write.

[Ruth]

Wow, I LOVE this one! lol xx

[Mitch*Dandy]

I like this one! It's funny and the twisted end is just hilarious! This is a good writing!!! I like what Santa put out for them =D

[Joe]

Dang! I really like this poem! It's creepy and has a sense of gruesome anti-heroism. The rhyme scheme is just like one of those christmas poems and adds to the creepiness. Great job! Keep it up!