Mortituri Te Salutamus

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As the wheels spin i go out of control,
I used to wonder if you had a soul
But since seeing you head in a downward spiral,
I didn't even need to hold a trial
Due to your world spinning out of control,
I've been able to save my soul
So thank you is said to you my friend,
As I know this isn't the beginning but the end.

Reviews

[StacyPerry]

The title is in Latin

[Lorraine]

I don't understand the title but that aside, I like the concept of your poem. It's ironic how our lives are saved when other people's lives are destroyed. I think I understand where you're coming at in this piece.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must learn the hard way. When we learn the truth. Need to run like hell. I like this poem. A perfect ending to the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

The imagery in this is amazingly hard hitting:) One of your best xx