Close your eyes

Close your eyes and dream a dream;

I'll be there when you wake up.

Let slumber carry you away in its soft grasp,

Let it silently blow your troubles away.

 

Holding hands we will enter the dreamland;

I'll keep your nightmares at bay.

Dancing under the soft moonlight,

You will always want to stay.

 

Close your eyes and dream a dream;

I won't ever leave your side.

We can always escape to our secret place,

No-one will ever take it away.

 

Adventure leads the path we dream,

And our romance tends to follow.

And in the end we always kiss,

but before we do I wake and feel sorrow.

 

Please close your eyes and dream a dream?

We wont be apart for long.

I'll meet you in our secret place

Just the two of us

Alone at last

So dream

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

ignore gramma and spelling! please reveiw :)

Reviews

[khalid]

longing for a lover's meeting is what i felt while reading this. it shows big deal of love and passion and at the same time longing and missing the beloved...
very sweet dream when it is about meeting the lover..

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Yep :D a great dream :3 thankyou for the review again! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

lovely poem...can't ignore the U missing in TROUBLE though......I am no literary expert but put that right and it would be perfect for ME

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thanks! Just fixed that typo :) thankyou for the reveiw ^^

[Mek & the Infinite Madn..]

now if only i can dream a dream without having to go to sleep... nice piece!

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Day dreams!! :p haha thanks for the review ^^

[Mek & the Infinite Madness]

yep... i think that's what you would call it haha!

[B-poet]

Very enchanting and creatively imaginative. Great job. An enjoyable read. :)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

thankyou :)

[captain]

dreams always has this feelings of escape from all the troubles, its like a paradise of problem free perhaps depending what you perceived it to be. nice write.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

thankyou :)

[Lord R.A.P]

very cute nd sweet... nice work

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

thankyou :)

[Distant horizons]

Ah, a beautiful dream indeed.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

thanks :)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[KurKota]

Contrary to a review I did on your previous writing posted, this one I really like !! Clear, focused, good structure....instead of being tedious, leaves one wanting more. Good write here !! Thank you for sharing !

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thankyou :) I"m glad you liked it ^^

[KurKota]

You are very welcome. I do like it alot.

[Lupus Kaos]

You must be a really romantic person.This is very good. Interesting poem, nice theme and simple, understandable expressions.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

I'm a female with girly fantasies. Hush. -3- hehe thankyou ^_^