Lost friendships

Today we sat side by side
A gap so small feeling so large
The ever so suttle wall between
With the noise of masses thickening that wall
The ache in our chest never subsided
As we realized too much has happen
Too much time has past
Our friendship has been numbed
Our brotherly/sisterly love cooled
I will miss you for ever in my heart
The boy who taught me so much
The boy who taught me to trust
Our friend ship lost its spark of life
Mourn it's death and long to fight.
With the pain and loneliness
Sad but true
We are two lost souls wishing for something new

Author's Note

Just a little something I wrote.. Never fight with friends. They are far to important and never be to stubborn to make up

Reviews

[KurKota]

Very thoughtful work. I like it very much. We often offend most those that are the closest to us, because we think we should be able to "get by with it"... (read my Scars to see my take on that). But aside from a few technical things i.e happen vs happened.. good work.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thankyou :) I"ll fix those mistakes when I get on my computer ^^

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

A wonderful poem. Nicely done, effective though words are not really your emotions. You're a wonderful writer.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

thankyou :)

[Lupus Kaos]

Although it seems a little sad, I think it has some nice meanings to pass to all of us. Good work, really meaningful to those who have lost a friend because of a fight or maybe another bad occasion.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thankyou :)

[Levi Levin]

Very nice poem. You did a great job! One of the worst feelings of all is losing a friend. It's a terrible, wretched wound upon the heart.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

It is.. Thanks for your review :)

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome:)

[Lord R.A.P]

real friends that is.... wonderful work, very deep.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thanks :D