Life and Crimson Ties

Fingers intwined
Ribbon of crimson
Falling like tears down their arms
Tied together their lives
Walking side by side
They don't see the truth until too late
They don't notice the warmth in the hand held in theirs
Ghost in their own lives
They have no control
Their love is lost before it is found
But sickly sweet red bounds them together
Wether the realization is there or not
Passion burnt through their souls
A passion for life and love.
Only to be cooled by the devastating coldness of ice.
The painful frost laced through the tackless words spoken through the mouth of a person.
Death is not the answer
But it is a salvation they are willing to risk
Don't take that risk with the bond between the lovers so strong
Notice the pull you both have before the ice freezes it
freezing the ribbons to the fragile point in-which it could break
Fight through the closing darkness till the darkness disperses
Hearts light shining through
Ribbons of red sparkling bright
Binding you together
Hope is not lost
Nor will it ever be lost
The ugly haunting your life cannot last forever
The spilling inky blackness will be washed away.
Life and crimson ties will always remain.

Author's Note

Hey. :) I just started writing and before I knew it this was on the page. I'm not sure if it will mean anything to you guys but it means a lot to me. :) please read, review, ignore my grammar/spelling. thanks!!

Reviews

[The Tabby Kitteh]

Wow your emotions were praticaly laced acrost the page. In some places it was a bit difficult to understand. "Don't see the truth until too late
They don't notice the warmth if the hand held in theirs." You could change this to, "Don't see the truth until it's too late." and "They don't notice the warmth if the hand's held in theirs." This poem was also very descriptive and painted amazing imagery. Especially the first two lines, "Fingers intwined" and "Ribbons of crimson". I loved the read. It is excellent poetry. You are a great poet. Keep writing. :)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

thankyou and i'll fix that part up. ^^

[Tribute To Jadey]

You are wrong...this does mean something to be, as I am sure it means something to many other people out there. You have such a talent. Thank you for sharing you poem Stacie, you have done well

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

beautiful emotions and imaginary
Enjoyed it

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thankyou :D I'm glad you liked it ^^

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you for writing