People

People
Their words are like poison
Seeping slowly into our body's
People
Venomous snakes that deceive and lie
Twisting our thoughts and toying with our emotions
People
Cruel and twisted
Even the most innocent- tainted in some way
Fragile and broken by the evil that is pumped through our veins
People
A million words could be used to describe us
A million words to discribe each emotion- each action- each thoughts that courses through our minds.
Think if the Kindness love affection- the good qualities of a human
But rip away the fake smiles and half hearted complements
And we are all but monster
People
We distroy everyday.
Wether we notice or not
People...

Author's Note

I have had a really bad day as you may tell. Review, ignore grammar, usual deal haha thanks!

Reviews

[The Tabby Kitteh]

Excelent poem here. I especially loved the lines, "Even the most innocent- tainted in some way
Fragile and broken by the evil that is pumped through our veins
People
A million words could be used to describe us
A million words to discribe each emotion- each action- each thoughts that courses through our minds.
Think if the Kindness love affection- the good qualities of a human
But rip away the fake smiles and half hearted complements
And we are all but monster." It is very descriptive and is just powerful wording as well. But I did notice one thing in the poem that kinda confused me a bit on a small spelling mistake. Don't worry it happens all the time as people write fast and don't realize one thing or another. The line is, "Crule and twisted." It is really, "Cruel and twisted." Other than that this poem is amazing, and you really are a fantastic poet. Keep it up I'd love to see more of your work in the future. :)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thankyou :DD

[quinfinn]

i have known this all along. all you had to do was ask me.....excellent write!

[Tribute To Jadey]

People are cruel, heartless, souless b******s...arnt we...Thats the message you have clearly shown through here. I like it.
We are all vile, poisinius beings.
Remind me never to anboy you when you're having a bad day.
Wonderful write

[Lost in Wonderland]

"People
Their words are like poison
Seeping slowly into our body's
People
Venomous snakes that deceive and lie
Twisting our thoughts and toying with our emotions
People
Crule and twisted "

all I can say is amen to that. Nice poem, very strong

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thankyou! :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

any time:)