Are You Okay??

Are You Okay??

A Poem by GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

We sit there smiling like the world is okay.

Even though inside we are dying.

When we show that we are the least bit sad

People ask 'Are you okay'?

Are you okay?

It is a bitter-sweet sentiment,

In which we always reply to as yes.

Why?

Because we know they are only asking to sooth their conscience

Even though the world is crumbling

You always fake smile and laugh
Why?

It is easier to pretend.

Even though you want to scream at the unfairness

And the unjustness of the world

You want to scream for recognition

You want to scream until all your worries are gone

And the soothing feeling of relief washes over you.
Are You Okay?

You wish and you pray.

You want your answer to be an honest Yes.

© 2013 GorgEOus NiGhtMarE


Author's Note

GorgEOus NiGhtMarE
please ignore spelling and grammer and reveiw!! :)

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A bittersweet world we live in. The most hardest questin to answer, because you're not really sure if the the person asking really does care or if they are just trying to ease their own worry, and sometimes in the end, their guilt.
This is another example of your skill. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think this is something everyone can relate to at one point or another in their life.
This line rings very true:

Because we know they are only asking to sooth their conscience



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

12 Years Ago

Thankyou for the review ^^
Great questions.
Also great ending for now,"You want your answer to be an honest Yes".

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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GorgEOus NiGhtMarE
GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

Mystery, Australia



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Since I was a child, all I've wanted to do is write, in hopes my writing would help people. I've been inspired by numerous people. From poets, to bands, and in particular, some people who are very clo.. more..

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