Thunder Clap Love

Thunder Clap Love

A Poem by GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

You struck me right down

lightning all around

thunder beats of my heart in sync with yours.

together were a storm

raging in our veins

we will make it together

take it day by day

 

we are the thunderclap love

 

we used to talk and laugh and joke around

you told me your secrets.

i begin to tell you mine

your touch remains ten hours after i last saw you and i wonder why

yes i wonder why!

 

you struck me right down

lightning all around

thunderbeats of my heart in sync with yours

thunder clap love

lightning struck heart

i think we have the thunder clap love

 

i always think about you day and night-

just cant seem to get you off my mind

sitting side by side i wonder what would happen if you read my mind

enternal battle

we are just frends

sadly.. oh god

 

you struck me right down

lightning all around

thunder beats of my heart in sync with yours

thunder clap love

lightning struck heart

do we have the thunder clap love?

 

he took my hand

my heart is racing

he looked me in the eye

then he said...

you no i love you?

i realy love you.

did you no....

 

you struck me right down

lightning all around

thunder beats of my heart in sync with yours

thunder clap love

lightning struck heart

we realy have the thunder clap love

 

thunder clap love (i really love you)

lightning struck heart (you no i do)

thunder clap heart

© 2013 GorgEOus NiGhtMarE


Author's Note

GorgEOus NiGhtMarE
ignore bad spelling or grammer please and reveiw! thanks!

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Well, I will ignore the grammar and whatnot but wow! This poem is really dynamic and very fun to read.
To me, the words danced around my eyes and the energy they had was great.
What a great title for a great poem :)
Keep it up!
-Penelope H.
BTW, thanks for subscribing to my writing. I hope you find my poems and my new story entertaining to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

11 Years Ago

thanks!! :D and i love all your work i could read it all day :3



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This is a very catchy way of capturing the thunder clap love, which you have done so nicely too. There was lighting in the voice that sounded through my head whilst reading this. Fantasticly done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wowza
Sooooo mcuh love :P Such a lovely, light piece, yet it has so much depth!
Loved it :) Xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well, I will ignore the grammar and whatnot but wow! This poem is really dynamic and very fun to read.
To me, the words danced around my eyes and the energy they had was great.
What a great title for a great poem :)
Keep it up!
-Penelope H.
BTW, thanks for subscribing to my writing. I hope you find my poems and my new story entertaining to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

11 Years Ago

thanks!! :D and i love all your work i could read it all day :3

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Added on December 2, 2012
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GorgEOus NiGhtMarE
GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

Mystery, Australia



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Since I was a child, all I've wanted to do is write, in hopes my writing would help people. I've been inspired by numerous people. From poets, to bands, and in particular, some people who are very clo.. more..

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