Hearts To Be won or lost

I was listening to Jar of Hearts and tis came out..

As I watch from above

You're holding your jar of hearts

Slowly adding one more

I'm glad i got away

before you had your chance

My heart was mine and never yours

Author's Note

Sorry for grammer/spelling
do you think thats good or should i add more??

Reviews

[Valorie Lauter]

Great poem...love it!!

[Star Wolf]

This is great! Love the imagery you use to talk about someone stealing hearts and yours you kept. I think this is awesome writing!

[Hatchling]

I love it!!!!!!!!!!

[Just Me]

That was awesome!!! Your best one yet!!!!! Let me guess, did tessa get u hooked on Jar of Hearts?????? She said she did. This was amazing!!!!! I absolutely loved it!!!! But if I were you I would take out the word "on" in teh 3rd line. Also try to add periods or commas where needed in the poem. But all in all i loved it!!!!!