Fire

Fire

A Poem by therapy

The thing is I'm not a firework, I'm merely just dying embers and am quickly burning out into nothing but just fading flickers, until there is nothing left at all. 

© 2014 therapy


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Dear Dying Embers.
You still have some hot sparks that I will blow on the next
chance I get and try to start a flame in your heart.
It is always a special pleasure to read a writer`s feelings expressed
in such graphic terms.
Thank you,
------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Honesty is the very best policy. We all hit those low points in our writing. I find that reading old time novels and listening to others speak of their lives and problems helps open the mind to new things. Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dear Dying Embers.
You still have some hot sparks that I will blow on the next
chance I get and try to start a flame in your heart.
It is always a special pleasure to read a writer`s feelings expressed
in such graphic terms.
Thank you,
------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

deep. Writing is a form of therapy.
You must learn a new way to think before you can master a new way to be.
maria rose♥

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a beautiful and very sad sentence. I fully understand your thoughts because I feel the same. As you write "I am quickly burning out into nothing"...

- Jesus


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is sad. That is what therapy is doing I guess. I like how this is one sentence and I can grasp it

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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