Me

Pathetic

needing strong arms to hold you close

crying because someone hurts you

loneliness

hugging yourself just for warmth

thinking your friends like others more

despair

falling on your knees and asking why

shouting out to the skys and beginning to cry

friends

people who should comfort you and be by your side

those who should know if your sad on the inside

my feelings

all i want is someone to hold me

my friends

vent to me but never care for my pain

my loneliness

covers me and all my joy

my despair

makes me question everything in my life

my patheticness

forces me to make mistakes

Reviews

[Richard Held]

I would like this talented young writer to write me a poem about the strengths that she posesses, about the beauty that she is, about the gifts that she brings. Because I know each of these questions can be answered. And beyond these answers lies an entirely new world for her.

[SunShine Meadows]

This would be very dark for you but its extremely good! well written and has great emotion!