dark beyond

The dark beyond,
It Is where I am,
I live in the dark beyond,
I need help,
Cant seem to ask,
I`m trapped,
Cant scream the pain,
Cant shout the pain,
Cant scream for help,
Cant yell for help,
Just stuck,
In the darkness of life,
Cant escape,
No escape,
Take the golden dagger,
Shove it through the heart,
So long I’m free bye bye,

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

It flows nicely and is incredibly easy to understand. At times I'm sure everyone has felt like that. Good poem. :D

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm...i like it.
Great Job