I Believed

I Believed

A Poem by srishti

 I will always love you, he assured

He will provide for me, i believed
I believed in everything he said,
In everything he did.
He would hold my hand, cuddled with his thumb over it and then hugg me so tight.
And i thought everything was going right...
But something happened in september mid,
He became someone to whom i could no more believe.
He had changed from genial to disinterested.
I knew his love had ended for me
Or maybe he had never loved me
Alas he wore his shoes and left without even looking back.
I was standing right there with my eyes full of tears.
Now i believed that i was believing the wrong person all the time.
Yes it did tore me from inside, yes i was hurt, yes i broke... 
I was changed now , i became a strong one , the one who had starting believing in HERSELF.

© 2015 srishti


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A very heartfelt poem Srishti. But you have so much hope in moving forward in your life. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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srishti

9 Years Ago

thank u :)
Simply , You have been deceived....
Now Your heart is of steel....:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liked the story you plotted. There are a few mistakes here and there, but a really good effort nonetheless. Keep posting 😃

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

srishti

9 Years Ago

Ty for the feedback! ^_^
AMAZINGLY WRITTEN KEEP IT UP !!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

srishti

9 Years Ago

thnks much

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A Poem by srishti