Myself

Something I thought of at the top of my head.

I look to myself to see what others see
I look into myself to feel what I thought was gone
I see myself as others do not see
I breathe with every beat of my heart
Thinking I love myself even if others do not

Author's Note

Leave whatever you think of it I know its not one of the best but like I said its something I thought of at the top of my head.

Reviews

[Kyle]

Well done! I like how this comes together. This also sounds a bit inspirational!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Well I think this is a great self portrait in writing of what is felt in side and all around,for such a short piece it said a lot Great job, Keep on wring.

[Shani Rigby]

To Ziggy and Richy Moon thank you very much I will be posting more when I can but I like that you like it even though poetry is not my thing I am currently writing a book trying to get either self published or an agent to get publish but trying to get it done first but I will post more stuff up when I can. i will not post my book because someone might steal it and I do not want my ideas being claimed by someone else. I thank you again.

I like this piece. It is very short and few of words. Yet it says a lot. I'm glad you're able to stay positive when others put you down. I can't wait to read more in the future.

[Richy Moon]

Sometimes random insperaton is good, I like it :) Its short but it still says something positive about yourself.