MOODS, WEATHER and FOOD !!

MOODS, WEATHER and FOOD !!

A Poem by Pratibha
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Self explanatory...Let me know what visions you get after looking at these snaps...share with me your feelings...!! For me, they bring loads of happiness, positivity and love... Do let me know whether i should continue ....the theme would be different ea

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© 2009 Pratibha


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Pratibha
POEM OF SNAPS !!

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You have just made my day with a photo poem. Just so you know. This is what I go to school for! Ok, now...

I really like this. It feels to me like a walk through the holidays and the autumn and winter, to come out the other side loved and warm and needing some relaxation. I feel a connection to the seasons throughout, and perhaps, the emphasis of family and friends in autumn and the need to be alone and connect back to the nature world come spring (after being locked indoors with family for so long.)

I would suggest just manipulating the order, the number of photos on a line, the use of photos that have the text... manipulate and think what "the narrator" of this poem is trying to make clear to the readers(viewers) of this poem.

Very awesome.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hey lovely, you know I just absolutely love this. You inspire everyone with your soul with your posts and I just wanted to say thank you for entering this into my poetry competition. :) Love ya! X

Posted 15 Years Ago


Might I just say this is a wonderful idea. I could have sat and looked at these pics all night, imagining great things as we do when the seasons change. It makes us realise how lucky we are to be able to experience such joys. Thank you sooooo much for this.
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was brilliant! So many of my favorite things are captured by those one little photos - which everyone says a picture is worth a thousand words. Bravo!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I never thought that you could even use photos to make a poem,KUDOS! My mind is going crazy with new ideas now that I know that you can do this on a website! So many thoughts and emotions and feelings came with each season you presented: Autumn, the feeling of warmth and family that comes with the colorful hues of the trees going into hybernation. Winter, snuggling warm by the fire as I sing Christmas Carols and Mom is cutting into that turkey that was actually cooked through and the feeling of thankfulness and faith. Spring(My fav season) The feeling of life and the light feel of shedding all the bad things and starting new.And Summer, the smell of freedom and the wind going through your hair as your at the beach.This was fantastic. You know what...My best friend is having a contest called "Snapshots" you should enter this.It will be totally uncalled for and she loves spotenaity.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ok, I feel more relaxed now! This was a really neat idea. Some of the picutres I just wanted to gaze at for hours! Lol! And each time I look at it one part becomes more interesting than the last. My favorites were the one ones depicting warm weather. I'm so sick of the cold! Great job Prati!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow long time since i saw a photo poem=) good job

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, My first reaction to your pictures is confusion, the picture I like best is 1) The rain, 2) You and your child, none of the food because I'm full except for the fruits and juices. 3) The candles I like,4) The sleeping baby is peaceful. 4)The gardens are nice. The lemonade should be my first, I love lemonade plus I can see Our lady in the shape of the lemon slices. Voila!!!!Thank you I had fun. God Bless you.
Hugs.....Annie

My mood is not with holidays, I'm waiting for spring.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have just made my day with a photo poem. Just so you know. This is what I go to school for! Ok, now...

I really like this. It feels to me like a walk through the holidays and the autumn and winter, to come out the other side loved and warm and needing some relaxation. I feel a connection to the seasons throughout, and perhaps, the emphasis of family and friends in autumn and the need to be alone and connect back to the nature world come spring (after being locked indoors with family for so long.)

I would suggest just manipulating the order, the number of photos on a line, the use of photos that have the text... manipulate and think what "the narrator" of this poem is trying to make clear to the readers(viewers) of this poem.

Very awesome.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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