When the Moon Falls Chpt 1

When the Moon Falls Chpt 1

A Chapter by Savannah Marie 9
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Where it all starts.

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"Aysel, get down here! The general want's us there at the base at noon!" Dad shouted at me for the millionth time today to hurry up. What? A girl takes her time getting ready.

 

"ALRIGHT! I'm sorry I am not as fast as Jake!" My brother Jake, laughed in the room next to us hearing my comment. I just glared at the wall and quickly finished throwing in the last of the things. Shampoo, bodywash, deoderant, tooth brush, underwear, bra, random other junk i'll find no use of, and done.

 

I was sad to leave the place I had to leave the place I had grown up all of my life. Hell my mother's water had broken in the kitchen downstairs when she was carring me. And thanks to that lovely new promotion dad got from the Air Force, we get to move most of our possesions, and get to live in a military base. On the bright side though it's by the Pacific and I can try to terrorize the place! I grabbed my last two bags, and grabbed the faded brass handle of the door. I turned around and gave my room one last look to sink in my brain before i never see it again. Well so long for the rest of my life as I burn in the seventh circle in hell.



© 2011 Savannah Marie 9


Author's Note

Savannah Marie 9
Sorry for all grammar mistakes. I do not own the Yautja of the Weyland Industries, Dark Horse Comics do. I just on Aysel and the amazing humans

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really good can't wait for more

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its kinda sad to leave a place you know and love so well. I know i didn't like it. Can't wait to read more!!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heyy that's really good! :D i really liked the descriptions and the way you made the character of aysel :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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