shark attack!

shark attack!

A Poem by spunkyleo

little seal swimming.
a great white lurks in the deep...
crimson stains the sea.

© 2013 spunkyleo


Author's Note

spunkyleo
this picture is very sad but it fit the haiku.

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You have the imagery correct! however keep mind to avoid run on sentences as in lines 1 and 2. keep working on it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


spunkyleo

11 Years Ago

thank you

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Added on June 5, 2013
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