the dragon's snack

the dragon's snack

A Poem by spunkyleo

damsel in distress
she waits for the armored knight
dragon wants a snack

© 2013 spunkyleo


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Oh,Oh you dropped the ball big on this one leo. The rules if you care fro them are not being adhered to . Just on concept with a big run on sentence:lines 1 and 2

Posted 11 Years Ago


spunkyleo

11 Years Ago

who needs rules? i just this poem poem cuz i was bored and sick. thanks for the review
Atthis Rose

11 Years Ago

A master once said. "Learn the rules and them forget them" my paraphrase
Ha! A fun senryu - personally I always root for the dragon... Good write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


spunkyleo

11 Years Ago

thank you, and i also root for the dragon. *dragon club*

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Added on June 4, 2013
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