Death Do Us Part

Wind-blown hair, strewn west of the lighthouse

Moonlight caught waves, sunlit clouds cast off

Gazes over timeless day and night

Unmoving is the nature of soil, into it I seep

Away from it, I sleep

Here is an ever-wakeful dream

Seek no answers

The place we are alone, in our minds

Distant edges of closer corners

A hexagonal space, an off-the-wall sphere-shape

We are all here to die

But how far away, from ourselves

Will we fall?

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A really good write, i like the ending:
"But how far away, from ourselves
Will we fall?"
... really good, this seems mysterious indeed and filled of it. Really liked this tho.

[bobby]

You wrote: But how far away, from ourselves Will we fall?
A ghostly nightmere of thought runs through this poem. The inevitable conclusion is asked and we still wonder the answer for ourselves. Your work is spell binding !

[Not Available]

This one is deep, your words form a picture of wonder
:)

[VioletRose]

I like your imagination, i like this writing

[KAREN]

Well written with excellent imagery!

[StarryNights]

I love the use of imagery in this poem and the differential atmosphere at the end

[trainwreck]

This was a great little write. I would love to see it expanded, but of course not too long. Anyway, this was great!

[Valentine]

Seems incomplete, as being near a lighthouse and the sea can conjure up so many poetic lines..Kathei

[writer with a mind]

I love it because it is very misterious like I want to read on well done