From Colour to Shade

Can you say spur of the moment? Please comment.

Your expressions change so fast
From colour to shade
No longer does it phase me
What happens here
There was a time when I wished for you
Now I can't read you
So I simply assume nothing at all
I may love you forever, somewhere hidden far away, and deep down
Or I may not
But my wishes won't sink to will
Unless your wishes meet my own
So for now I will hide my heart away
In a scarlet box
Buried beneath the ocean in my closet of a mind
One day, when the sky grows a deeper shade of blue
And when the stars begin to twinkle a little bit brighter
That box may be uncovered
Once more
But for now
I bid you adieu
Let time pass on...

Reviews

[OtherWorldWoman]

Thank you very much. I appreciate the comments. Anyone else who reads this should feel free to comment with any critisicm or feelings they have towards my poem. I am always willing to hear what you think.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a fantastic write. Very nicely written with great descriptions. Awesome job!!!

Heather

[Moonflower]

Let time pass on...this is a whimsically heart tugging piece, A lovely slice of a dull pain.

[LivingDeath]

This is an amazing poem shen. I can tell it comes from the heart. Very deep, 11/10