Private Eye - A Day In The Life

Lights were dim
And the clues were found

Hanging on the wall
Sleeping in the ground

Distant hum
Of a stereo sound

Cracking in two
As the rain came down

~SMC

Reviews

[G. H. Ivanovic]

Very well written.
I would love to find out what else you have to offer...
Please write more!

[Botania]

A gardener who wears a hat (hanging on the wall) that has scattered seeds on the ground (sleeping until they start to sprout) has left his faint radio outside, but now it's broken and won't work since it's gotten wet from rain all at sunset. No one broke it after all! Mystery solved! haha. fun.

[KanaDream]

I feel like I'm in a movie... It all started that one day she came into my office... I could see that she was troubled even though the only noise I heard was the rain outside the window... Yep, I'm in a movie. Very cool! Keep Dreaming ^^