THE CALL

The call from two sides

THE CALL

Your call I hear , I am sure

And see the way

Right and straight 

Still ,  hesitate to enter !

So soon , a smiling face

Decent in appearance 

Silly chats exchanged

To the other way, leads me on.

Ah ! glittering and illuminating 

The way ,  I proceed along,

Feel dizzy  with utmost joy 

With the millions , same as me !

 Clouds black dim the brightness

A sudden halt for the merry march

Chaos  takes over us

Not knowing the way out.

The new entry, still, never ceasing 

With the mind  once we had

 To guard them, the same companion 

 Knowing not how they have been fooled .

Oh ! to come out I strive 

From the drudgery  indulged in

To hear once more , the call

And to see the way - straight and right !

Sayed thangal

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

the call of right and wrong. I saw images of a pilgrimage heading to the Ganges all having a calling but temptations to tempt lie also on this journey!. a lovely write Sir

[SAYED THANGAL]

You reached in contact point. Well
Thanks a lot dear

[Great Aunt Astri]

The call can sometimes mislead us. I suppose that is what is meant by 'discerning'. Sometimes we have to think twice before acting. This is what your poem says to me ... I have probably misinterpreted it, have I ?

[SAYED THANGAL]

No , you are right. The call seems tasty but it leads to us to the wrong direction.
Thanks a lot for your review

[TL Boehm]

this is so indicative of our inner voice when it mulls our relationships. Well penned

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks for the review

[BrockGirl]

I enjoyed this. Well written. Brings many images.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks dear for the positive feed back

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

As usual this one is amazing...to as far as i could understand it. your words are always deep penetrating. Though my age and knowledge didnt allow me to absorb the whole of it..I liked it sir.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear for your positive feed back

[A. Amos]

Simply brilliant piece of art, love the title and contents were marvelous!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thank you sir

[Saddam]

Feel dizzy with utmost joy
With the millions , same as me !
Clouds black dim the brightness.

An Amezing poetry. It is really nice to see your works resume again with more lights. I really like your verses Sir.

[SAYED THANGAL]

hearty gratitude for the feedback

[SAYED THANGAL]

what do you say about 'the call' ?