LULLING ALWAYS

Tickling the leaves, I watch them laughing

Dancing merrily together.

Push them forward from behind

Thus chuckling with waves.

Always I come to your home

Receive me with pleasure,

I'm calm, causing no harm

Which makes your body warm.

You feel hot and dry

Bring I the thick clouds.

I provide the night sleepy calm

Which makes your tiring bed relax.

Often I change my track 

When I chose to crack

Very sorry to see

I'm furious and harm then !

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

you capture the wind so nicely from the teaser to anger!

[SAYED THANGAL]

Thanks for the lovely words

[Great Aunt Astri]

A lovely poem. It took me a while to realise that it was the wind speaking. Beautifully penned, but the last line jars a bit. Perhaps ... I am furious and then I harm. But on reflection perhaps you meant to have an abrupt end to suit the Fury of the wind.

[SAYED THANGAL]

Ok. I did it because if the wind becomes fury it smashes every thing so fast.
Thanks dear for the kind words

[Ladysue]

there is nothing like a warm calm breeze to lull us into tranquil..I like the layers within..this is a lovely written piece..beautifully done..

[SAYED THANGAL]

hearty gratitude for your lovely words

[Ladysue]

your welcome.. I enjoyed the read..

[Saddam]

An spectacular and splendid write. Great to read your calmness. Amazing at your story telling ability. Thanks for sharing.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear for your support

[Frieda P]

Ahh those calming zephrs will surely lull one to sleep, the furor of turbulent winds though, not so much...always a lovely thought of nature in your pen, enjoyed Sayed.

[A. Amos]

I really like the flow and your story telling in this chill-out poetry, simply spectacular!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear

[Bowers]

this was so beautiful with meaning!
"bring I the thick clouds.
I provide the night sleepy calm"
beautiful words,
a great piece!

[SAYED THANGAL]

ok, thanks very much dear for your positive feed back

[Vidya Bacchus]

Beautiful my dear Sayed .Is it the wind or the sun or am I wrong about it being either lol ?.Penned suberbly true :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

you are right, it's the wind, thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

I say I receive this message with pleasure and sleep the nights with power...Excellent...:)..............

[SAYED THANGAL]

hearty gratitude dear friend for your support

[Sami Khalil]

Hearty welcomes...:)...................................

[SAYED THANGAL]

most welcome

[Sami Khalil]

:)................................

[SAYED THANGAL]

It's about some thing that's always very powerful, inevitable but invisible, what do you say ?