INVISIBLE YET POWERFUL

Do not consider the invisible things as minute and infirm.

INVISIBLE YET POWERFUL

Horrible utterances and frantic movements

Of helpless souls,

Struggling the shivering hands, legs unsteady

with tongues dried, hollowness in the eyes.

Still, out of range, the shore

Twisting and tossing the vessel

Defenceless against the waves,

Gigantic, roaring and rushing.

The panoramic view blocked by the mountain clouds

And aimless fly of sea birds

Of sweat music turned to wild

Bowling with reddish staring.

The bright, but closed the eyes

The moon from above, unable

To see the torture, ears shut the stars

Unbearable to hear the the mass cries.

Invisible, yet powerful, the wind

No other way for the mortals, but  yield.

sayed thangal

Reviews

[Daniel Dawes]

Simply beautiful.....well written and straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks for your review

[Bowers]

invisible, yet powerful, the wind
how strong such a line is
such power in words!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear for your review

[Vidya Bacchus]

So lovely.We cannot see the wind but we feel it and it is great :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

so like wise the God, invisible but powerful. thanks for your review

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Frieda P]

Sometime the things that are not tangible are the most powerful, nicely constructed sayed.

[SAYED THANGAL]

God, unseen, yet powerful , think such a way,.........

[Jeannear]

very nice poem thanks for sharing

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear, visit you soon

[Sami Khalil]

"aimless fly of sea birds

Of sweat music turned to wild

Bowling with reddish staring.




The bright, but closed the eyes

The moon from above, unable

To see the torture, ears shut the stars

Unbearable to hear the the mass cries."

It is true that when souls are helpless they utter horrible things and move frantically...
We should appreciate the small things...A splendid read and write...

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot for your encouragements

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)..............

[Praveeta]

Well crafted poem Sayed. Thanks for sharing.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks dear

[Praveeta]

You are welcome talented friend.