UNSEEN CONTROLLER

UNSEEN CONTROLLER

A Poem by SAYED THANGAL
"

To control some thing, a controller is always needed.

"
The beginning unknown

So is the end

Straight forward

Never turns back

All wait for me

But I for none

Punctual ,accurate and precise

Spread every where

Not a land unseen 

Not a being unfriendly

Familiar with 

The smallest to the tallest

Though unseen

Sees every thing,

Living and non living

Present every where

And presides over every thing

Day and night

Birth and death

The beginning and end of all

Within control, the uncontrollable.

sayed thangal

© 2013 SAYED THANGAL


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though i could not understand all of it...this is an amazing piece...!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

it is not proper to disclose, but for your sake , it's about ''time''
This is a new concept for me. And it is show the both side of coin. Lovely... Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

so thanks for the nice words
Hi Sayed, your poem reminds me of yin yang concept, how opposites are interconnected and interdependent. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

special thanks for new input.
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Every positive has a negative you have portrayed this well sayed:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thank you dear
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome:)
You have touched on the duality of our world...Splendid...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

appreciating your support
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..............
it's a new one, how do you see this ?

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 31, 2013
Last Updated on December 31, 2013
Tags: creator, controller, every thing

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SAYED THANGAL
SAYED THANGAL

malappuram, kerala, India



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I'm Sayed Thangal from Malappuram distric, Kerala, India, have been working as a teacher in English at Gvt. Higher secondary school Vazhakkad . Two years before I wrote two poems, the response and en.. more..

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