BEYOND THE BANKS

Sea, never can explain.

Stretching both hands out

The host moves herself forward,

Hugs and escorts the guests in

Who have covered distances long.

Resources to the empty boats,

With nets and hope,

Of multitude, poor and needy.

How generous she is !

Treasure , invaluable and uncountable,

Has on its lap been concealed.

To the voyagers sets the passage smooth

And tracks to the ships gigantic !

For her nothing indigestible

Except those of civilized ones

Yet ,no revenge she has

Sends moisture up for them!

Find no time to remain idle

Busy and lively always ,

Smiles to the friends dear

Who come to enjoy the sunset !

Sayed Thangal

Reviews

[Daniel Sala]

A lovely ode about the sea, a warm portrait, nice poem, Sayed.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks

[writ rajat]

I love the title the poem and formate

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks

[Sami Khalil]

A very beautiful and descriptive poem about the sea. You give it more depth and mystery than it is...Bravo..............

[SAYED THANGAL]

so nice to hear from you,

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)....................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Is this about your river Sayed ?Nicely penned .

[SAYED THANGAL]

it's about the common sea, not about a particular river,
thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay then you are welcome:)

[Praveeta]

Well penned. Thanks for sharing.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear,

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Dispersus]

from my viewpoint here in the North Sea, I absolutely approve !!! :-)

Peace

[SAYED THANGAL]

you changed your name ? thanks a lot.

[Dispersus]

I know not of what you speak

[SAYED THANGAL]

I'm sorry, I misunderstood you as another person, looking the profile picture.