ASSISTANCE...BUT FIXED

Is soul remain with body always ?

Swift my journey, no region out of reach

With sharp eyes, nothing unseen 

No whisper unheard- precise my hearing

You never can chase me !

For transportation, no means required

Do vehicles surpass my speed?

The darkest night hampers not my sight

Where ever ,at any time, I wish, I would be.

No language unknown- no area unfamiliar

No culture unyielding, no society unfriendly

No religion alienated 

Beyond my grasp , no caste ,no tribe.

Me your bosom companion

Assist you always to think

To speak, to laugh , to cry

But the term fixed !

Aware of your limitation, weakness 

Suppress your ego,hatred,envy

For you are time bounded

Too small to contain me,

Can  mortality be a match to immortality ?

sayed thangal

 

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

You raie good philosophical questions in this poem. A thougt provoking piece..Bravo.............

[Praveeta]

A well crafted poem reminding us to enjoy life to the fullest and let go off negative thoughts and emotions before soul bids us farewell.

[SAYED THANGAL]

yes, as you point out,it may remind our duty, thanks
sayed

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Daniel Sala]

A fasciating reflection on the soul and the temporal. A great poem, Sayed.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot, my dear

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a very thought provoking piece.Well written sayed:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks for the comment, take care

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)