THE BUS STOP

Bus stop is only a temporary spot, waiting to reach at a destination.

THE BUS STOP

Types various, colours different

To a zone, with strangers, taken away,

With passengers new, as waves to the shore

Lively again, to the stop, to get on the bus.

Busy and short, glad mixed gloomy

Plat form, temporarily to stay destined.

A testing spot to the stop next, the destination

Of immortality, truth and eternity

The span short, vague and uncertain 

Of time little to spend for others,

In between the two, birth and death

Forget to live, for the life here after.

Evaporated from the minds, the love

But thirst for blood, rebukes and revenges.

Remember, the bus's fast approaching 

For you too to get on.

sayed thangal

     

Reviews

[Daffy]

Very good, Sayed. Yes, life is merely a bus ride to heaven and certainly a bumpy one along a very rough road, that crosses many raging rivers full of dangerous 'reptiles'!
We should all count our blessings, and realise how fortunate we are to be in such good care.
Most enjoyable, Sayed.

[SAYED THANGAL]

very happy to hear such words from you, thanks
sayed

[Daffy]

Over here, we sing a song: count your blessings, count them one by one, and it will surprise you what the Lord has done! Daffy

[SAYED THANGAL]

sure, no doubt.

[TL Boehm]

A testing spot to the stop next, the destination

Of immortality, truth and eternity

The span short, vague and uncertain

Of time little to spend for others,

In between the two, birth and death

Forget to live, for the life here after.

Evaporated from the minds, the love

words to listen to and live by.

[SAYED THANGAL]

do you like the poem really ? some times so, that is why you repeated those lines, thanks

[bushra khalil]

yes the idea is more likely the same....Once slept never awakes .. it's good

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks, very happy to see you in the site, can communicate with many rather than the previous.
I''ll look some of your poems,
sayed

[Vidya Bacchus]

If the bus stop is life i understand.Life is made up of so many different and varied personlities.Interesting piece

[SAYED THANGAL]

deep gratitude to your response and lovely words.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Daniel Sala]

The poem is an interesting description of life, and what we do or don't do with it, nice use of metaphors.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks for your positive response, all the best
sayed

[SAYED THANGAL]

what do you say about the bus stop ?