ALWAYS WITH YOU

I'm always with you

I am the roof , common to all,

Very vast and splendid

You all I see alike

The rich same to me as poor.

No decoration further needed

All's well, I do exist

No divisions , nor boundaries have I made,

Towards your mother as you did.

The burning ball ready  always

To render what you need to grow.

The shades black and white

Relieve you when in drought

Day and night I'm with you

Watching and waiting .

sayed thangal

Reviews

[Tumara Hall]

Wow this poem is so dreamlike and smoothly written. It has a delicate and subtle touch of a spiritualistic nature and just brings warmth to the heart. You transferred it so well from heart to paper that you can barely tell. Well done!!!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thank you for your firm support, an encouragement to try for the new.

[SAYED THANGAL]

It has a spiritual touch, I believe so, what do you say ?