THE CIRCLE

all draw circles, wanted their circles to be large.

Mechanically I draw the circle

Hurried and busy always,

 I'm sure , you too are

On the same routine !

I want to draw a big one,

It would be so , I hope.

 For the big, you too try

Not different from me your hope

Alas ! some draw  small circles

Finish them and go for ever,

Without your will, a day

Would it be finished !

The aged ones are no exception

Optimistic beyond reason

Expect the larger circles

But circles are circles,

No other way.....just finish !

sayed thangal

Reviews

[Daniel Sala]

"Mechanically I draw the circle
Hurried and busy always,
I'm sure , you too are
On the same routine !
(...)
the aged ones...Expect the larger circles
But circles are circles,
No other way.....just finish !"

Me too, love this poem. The brevity, again, belies a depth of meaning which is excellent.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thank you for your lovely words.

[KLMazon]

Loved it. Original comment wouldn't post and it was too long to retype :/

[SAYED THANGAL]

I'm drawing my circle, hope it would be a large one, you ?