THE FOOD OF DEVIL

The food of devils only suitable for devils, not for humans.

Traditionally have I the capacity

To distract humanity

 Devilish your deeds would be

When I'm in, 

For me, the food of the devil.

 Colours vary, types and brand differ

Still unity I have 

To make your mind unbalanced

  Never to recognize hence

The right from the wrong

A frozen state and mental stupor,

Yes, I play my role well !

I laugh at you, the coward

Unable to face the realities of life 

Escape from the main stream

Destroy health, wealth and home yourself.

Money , by hard work, you earn

Spent just to buy me,

The poison !

You are an animal, aren't you ?

With no sense to discriminate, 

Before you mother similar to wife

Daughters,sisters  only women !

Family tie up , I do unhinge

Fill the mind with anger and revenge 

Because I like to see you tortured.

All the good in you over turned

I laugh at you, coward !

sayed thangal

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

The allusions are there but seem a bit unclear as they appear to be somewhat culturally derived and the context is uncertain - the focus blurry; at least for this reader. Again we have the '?' misplaced - perhaps on purpose or in error. That is for you to decide.

[Frieda P]

Wicked sentiments purged in this one sayed...anger and revenge, never a good thing but I get it...good flood of emotions right down to the last line. Well done.

[SAYED THANGAL]

surely your words are very useful, thanks

[Frieda P]

My pleasure.

[Manuel Samo]

Great work sir......this flows perfectly well.....I simply love your panache of style of writing

[SAYED THANGAL]

thank you so much for your encouragements,
sayed

[Daniel Sala]

"Fill the mind with anger and revenge
Because I like to see you tortured.
All the good in you over turned
I laugh at you, coward!"

Great stuff, many a person ruined through vice beyond occasional pleasure, and hurting those around them in the process. The way you combine the image of the Devil and poisons of all kinds, and the negative effects of living a lie and/or one of excess is harsh for some but nevertheless true.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks once more my dear

[SAYED THANGAL]

this poem may an eye opener to all, will you ?