MUSIC

Music is some thing, which we can't describe how this works, it's a vast and wonderful abstract concept, I believe.

MUSIC

Harder, tougher, stronger minds

Before music, as ice before the sun, melt.

Heaviness of heart and sorrow to solace

Yields  when flows, the music.

     So deep the sea, steep the mountains

      Stretching, never ending the deserts,

     Thick the forest, and the sky boundless.

   Far high, dominating, the music, surpasses.

Music, the language of the mind, common to all

Where no religion, no colour, no caste would prevail

It's a wave, flows over the boundaries 

No barrier,  spreads everywhere.

     To a stressed mind, the healing touch

     To the celestial spot, transports the mind

     Relaxed, relieved, and retired

     To a solitude of spiritual sensation.

Reviews

[Saddam]

Music, the language of the mind, common to all
Where no religion, no colour, no caste would prevail
yes music has not any bound it cross all the boundary, as i like KING OF POP, and A R REHMAN song and music. Very impact able poem. and musical.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot for your review

[Saddam]

your welcome sir...

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Many ignore the fact that music does this to us...well crafted poem sir....its more like a music notes than a mere poem!!!!!!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot my dear

[Praveeta]

"Music, the language of the mind, common to all

Where no religion, no colour, no caste would prevail

It's a wave, flows over the boundaries

No barrier, spreads everywhere.

To a stressed mind, the healing touch

To the celestial spot, transports the mind

Relaxed, relieved, and retired

To a solitude of spiritual sensation."

These stanzas are amazing. Nicely penned

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Tam Warink]

I especially liked this line, "Music, the language of the mind, common to all..." Should we wonder what is a life such that music may contrast in a way to relive the opposites of relaxed and retired? Nicely done, Sayed.

100 celestial transports

[SAYED THANGAL]

so much pleasure to know , you liked those lines. thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is beautifully written and deeply touching.Well penned Sayed.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot my dear

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.

[SAYED THANGAL]

Music lovers, and musicians will breathe the music, Sayed, this is touching, and riches the senses of a true listener. Beautiful, and poetically spoken, I agree with Moon beneath, music feeds, but also frees the soul... thank you for sharing, my best,

- Elisa

[SAYED THANGAL]

thank you for your lovely words, take care
sayed

The pleasure is all mine, you too friend.

[MOON]

Music feeds the soul. Lovely write.

[SAYED THANGAL]

very to see your comment, wish you the very best.
sayed

[MOON]

Music feeds the soul , lovely write.

[Sami Khalil]

A very good write on music...Bravo.................

[SAYED THANGAL]

surely it is an inspiration for me to compose new, thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

[Daniel Sala]

Another delightfully concise composition, Sayed, "Music, the language of the mind, common to all" - very positive. This poem feels warm and giving, if that makes sense. Thank you.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot, especially for pointing the two errors.

[Daniel Sala]

A pleasure, sir.