Her smile gave way to laugher (Part One)

Part one of what will hopefully turn out to be a series

Her smile gave way to laughter(one) ------------------------------------------- From across the subway car I could hardly make out the lyrics seeping through her earphones Perhaps "Wherever my eyes may be..." "Wherever your heart may wave you..." It took me a minute to get it right Then I had to grab my pen and write To the love of my life: I cant live without you I cant live without you I cant live without you I cant live without you I cant live without you Or do you just want to f...     Sincerly Spoken Her smile gave way to laughter...

Reviews

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Yo, I really like how you came off on this piece. It was smooth, and new-school...the subway car...the headphones letting the beat seep thru to you...

Those interactions that sometimes never include words. Her smiling in the end....

Dope piece.