Honestly this one makes me think of someone who's on the path to insanity as it slowly takes over the mind causing the person to do things considered abnormal. Reminds me of the great poets. I love ! Keep up the good work!!
Ah..Actually that brought whole picture in front of me..Killing innocents , everywhere you see dead bodies..You wrote this one really well..An the most important part was that as I read it I can actually imagine everything..You know every writer cannot do these..There are some writers whose writings you read but they can't paint the entire picture before your eyes..Actually for me a writer isn't different from a painter or an artist , the only different is that the painter has to paint the picture through colours and a writer has to do it through his words and I must say that you were successful in painting that picture..
Well done..
Makes me think of misery, death and pain and suffering. All these things. That do kill people bit by bit. But eloquently worded and phrased in this poem. Shocking true thou.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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t's plain and simple. I don't give a s**t. Just writing what I'm feeling tomorrow. I can write pieces that will stick to me for a lifetime. I can also throw those very same pieces in the garbage a wee.. more..