Another Writers Cafe Poem

Another Writers Cafe Poem

A Poem by Jerichael Hoffmanshireton
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a follow-up, possibly a soliloquy, inspired by the hollows of the soul...

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It is dark. In my soul.

Where the heart is. Muted. Depraved.

Lamentations…

Blood drips like wine

From a crystalline glass… my bones.

A demon reaps my mind

Apart. Within. Outside. Voidless.

This pain, that finds me

In my dark corner… deprived soul.

Save me from this abundance,

This cold, icy, empty, plane.

Love. Desire. Passion, worthless…

Why I ask? Why….

Sorry. Sorrowing. Sorrowful….

Tranquility amidst the following

Though numb to (striking) fear.

A box __ to hold it in. to keep

Out… the spirits untamed.

They guard me. Salvation. Legions.

(kuwanger.) insectuous anger.

Evil thought, the not-brightness

Of my angels

Pervades my thoughtful respite.

Pensive pain, besiege me, find me

In my dark, angular corner…

Angels, mine, fly! Into

The not bright sky, like my heart,

But not the same.

Life is like a godless river,

Wet and futile.

Musical cosmos, record my lines

In the annals of your stars,

Your abyss; twisted shadows.

A realm of forgotten language,

Derivations from dismal pasts,

Longing to respire. Wrongful love

Corrupts the ghosts of horrid

Happiness. Bleak. Empty. Void.

House my dark design. I plead.

Part the seas of my grief. I beg.

Find me ‘mong the ice! I cry.

And wallow, in rocky clouds.

Polar heart. Infernal veins.

Abyssal paths. Artorial fire,

Unlock my abysmal heart

With the twelfth enochian key…

© 2010 Jerichael Hoffmanshireton


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Musical cosmos, record my lines
In the annals of your stars,
Your abyss; twisted shadows.
A realm of forgotten language,
Derivations from dismal pasts,
Longing to respire. Wrongful love
Corrupts the ghosts of horrid
Happiness. Bleak. Empty. Void.
House my dark design. I plead.
Part the seas of my grief. I beg.
Find me ‘mong the ice! I cry.
And wallow, in rocky clouds.
Polar heart. Infernal veins.
Abyssal paths. Artorial fire,
Unlock my abysmal heart
With the twelfth enochian key…

I liked the ending part.

Posted 11 Years Ago


TLK

11 Years Ago

"Find me 'mong the ice."
omg.. "dervations form dismal pasts, longing to respir" I know EXACTLY what you mean! lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really great imagery, very expressive. I just love how much sense this makes.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 2, 2010
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