A Writer's Cafe Poem

between three hearts!

                Shadow sprang forth unto my whisper

                Wrapped… Concealed… Emancipated

                The blood drips silkfully amid me like silent dark wine

                Weepingly swept with the purest ambiguousnessocity

                I’m feeling the sorrows of lost tomorrows… deadnesses

                Among one item were nine items wanted… I tearfully cry

                A thousand shattered souls… wasteland… deception: this is me

                So she ganders whereupon countless darknesses amid the void

                Skillfully now, graceful item, wanton

                Vengeance be a mongoose, salvation serpentinely lies

                Caressing… withholding… pilfered

                Neath darkness beckons ominously… flagrantly

                ‘This gleams my face’ said I, ‘among it’

                Meretricious molecules beget my raff apologies

    Thine knight’s plastron heart glistens unto the unborn moon

    Self-repressed…  Self-ordained… Omnipotence-geodesicness

    Contemplating the dark design of these WRETCHED POEMS, MY GOD.

 

Reviews

[razormuse]

A lot of interesting vocabulary. Very expressive.

[Ravenskald]

LOL true too true too true
love your reviews of your reviews of your reviews too

[Pakino]

great piece of work love the words you chose and how you ended it.

[Greg Close]

The parody is at least a little amusing, if not a cheap, self-important, shot at the work other people have posted on the site.

[Jerichael Hoffmanshiret..]

omg! this poem! it's so totaly amzaing! its compltly changed my lyfe for real.

[Jerichael Hoffmanshiret..]

OH my god, it's so incredible I feel like dying..
I feel like dying...
Please.