with a dragon breathing down my neck

we'll make a parade of you yet.

you told me,
what matters is us. what matters is that the 24-hour laundromat has yet to close,
and that i still have hair left to burn. that my mother will still be there to bake
pasta on tuesdays and warm leftovers on thursday, and if the cat comes home
then nobody wins or loses.

what matters is that i can still read the alphabet backwards and
remember what four times six is and what i wore on graduation night and
what the smell of alcohol is like when it goes up in flames.

what matters is that i have two kidneys and a family that functions,
that the first sun rises inches from my fingertips and i never have to wake up wondering
where i am, what i've become.

you told me,
what i want to know is why. who picks the people to suffer, and
why.

you told me,
you are so lucky. i tugged your iv twice to let you know that
maybe, i am.

you told me,
i can see the stars through your ceiling, sometimes.

you told me and only me once upon a time,
i want to write and to write and to write and to write and to
write. i never want there to come a day where the pen is not the moment
and prose is not laboring at my doorstep, demanding entrance to this tea party for two.

i want to be able to make rubber clocks and styrofoam men out of ugly words for stapled beauty and
create and create in virulent waves, and never ever stop being the perpetrator of
small but miraculous things. i want to be a stunt double so i can learn how to take risks,
but only for a little while because i can't spare much time. i have plans, the world exists only in small increments.

you said, i sure seem to want a lot of things.
i shrugged at the sterile white walls. i never thought it too much to ask for.

later, when reality made this dream seem but a distant, discolored smear, you ripped every page
of every notebook out and tossed them upwards to the sky,

where it rained bitter white inspiration for months.

(i sought for your ark through the torrential downpour of sunny sheets,
but i only found it behind the paramedics in the ambulance drifting away.)

years later in retrospect you told me with your smile at an angle, what matters is that i tried, right?

you told me,
i'm not a hero. i just don't have the anchors for fears anymore.

i didn't cry in front of you after that, but i still cried. the pencil marks on your skin
make note of a growth chart, but i tried my hardest not to outline your veins.

this would be the day that the doctors swarm in by the cult-clothed dozens, all
mechanical limbs with screwed-on sympathies and smiling white pretenses. this would be the day,
another notch on my bedpost, another reaper in my shed left to suck me dry.

you told me,
i don't know where or when i lost them, but they're probably all
caught up in the swells of someone else's ocean by now.

and all i can think is how can you ever be ready for this.

you told me,
the zebra will come back. the girl will say yes. he's actually her half-brother. team d will get lost in the jungle and no,
it's not better than fast food.

you told me,
i'm a mess. i'm a mess i'm a me s s i am a m es s. what's happening to my life?
i said, nothing. life's happening to you.

you are a static and flavorless lump on the cot when you sleep for a week after that,
dreaming about catfishes to mars and the great illuminated sea.

and sometimes when the nights are longest and the moon is imaginary,
i feel like hope is a false and pointless deviation, but then your fingers tighten in mine
and i remember what matters.

what matters is us.

Author's Note

written just today, in twenty laborious minutes.

also, as for posting two things on the day i joined:
i don't really have anything to say to that. i guess i'm overzealous.

Reviews

[Nish Nish the Fish]

ohh you changed it! I like the new additions, i like those random phrases that you include that are just so powerful, and they take over my mind, and make me think about them, and then they make me feel like, crap now im gonna go attempt to write something as fantastic as this. but that usually doesnt happen anyway.

"where it rained bitter white inspiration for months." beautiful, inspirational, phenomenal...and the list goes on..

[Nish Nish the Fish]

Yay we found eachother in this crazy paradoxical site that ive come to adore! :)

blah well i already spurted my heart and soul of this piece in face book but as a preview; this was fantastic, i just love the way, and this applies to all your pieces, that you have such a unique voice and you take us through your story and put us through what you're going through. that's my goal in writing. i aspire to achieve it :)

this is beautiful jenny, and so are you! keep on writin

[Raef C. Boylan]

I wish I could write something as great as this in twenty minutes.
It's the sort of poem about which some readers will complain it's too vague and too fragmented but it works so well to build up a big picture of the relationship between these two people - not its status, I mean I don't know whether they're partners, siblings, friends or what - but the complex, open nature of their interaction. It's brilliant.
I enjoyed reading this a lot. To be honest, I don't even know if it's a sad or positive poem.
Some writing is more about the words and attitude than total understanding.
Thanks for sharing this.