clearity

a poem of sight, froma blind mans eyes

Clearity

 

I see, what i see

nothing else

i see nothing

so what do i see?

 

 

I see you

As you see me

And you ask, how is that

If i blind man, can see

 

ill tell you how

i listen to you

I talk with you

I ask you about your day

 

If you have an ayre of attitude

When you talk of others,

Above or below you

Than i picture you as

A snott faced troll

 

If you are quiet.

Seriene

A see you as a small image,

Fading into the back ground of life

A good person i see you as

You think before you speak

 

If you stutter

Your un-couragous

A small, dot

Easily seen

And never forgot

Mabey a good person,

Who needs to learn something

 

So you see how it goes

You see how i see now

What do you think?

 

I'll tell you what

I see more than you

I see you for your actions

Your words

How you speak of others

How you think of others

How you act with others

 

 

I see more clearly than you.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[nonno noo]

I like the structure of your poem, as well as the confident tone of the speaker.