Writing exercise! Sorry not a complete story

Writing exercise! Sorry not a complete story

A Story by spicyapplebum
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I remember....

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I remember the farm was along the end of a country road, quiet enough for us to all ride our bikes without me fearing the children would die under a car’s wheels. It would give us a tremendous sense of freedom, only steps away from our village and we would be in the country; with just birdsong and the click of wheels; catching the sweet scent of strawberries and straw carried by the breeze across the fields.
We would reach the farm, fresh faced, as the lane was a steady climb, park our bikes near the rickety fence and feed the mallard ducks in the pond our hard dry bread. We would laugh as they bobbed about with their bottoms in the air as they fished out the weed from the lake bed. When the bread had been eaten, and the last disappointed duck waddled away we would slowly walk our bikes up the gravel path passing the smithy on our way. We could never walk past without leaning in on the stable door, peering at the arrangement of metal, forge and tools, the cobwebs gently floating in the breeze brought to mind ghosts from the past.
The barn was an impressive entrance to the farm, we locked our bikes under the huge oak tree, and made our way through the entrance to be greeted by the odd hen or two, scratching in the dust at some unknown worm or other. The Farm museum was just like time had stood still, the whitewashed farmhouse was separated from us by the yard filled with cows, pigs and sheep. It seemed to reflect an earlier age, a gentler age when people kept chickens and had fresh eggs each day.
The children would delight in visiting the hen house, rooting out the eggs some still warm as the hens reluctantly left their nests by the inquisitive children. Some times there would be a small clutch of eggs in the hatchery, complete with new chicks! Then we would lean over the sty to gaze at the little piglets so clean and white: their squeals an endless cacophony in comparison to the mother’s gentle passivity as they rooted around her teats.
It was the farmhouse itself that was our delight, with a huge range always glowing even in the warm summer, (Southern England knows nothing of heat) and we would watch as Martha would demonstrate picking, bread making, or other home cooking. Often the sweet smell of apple pie would entice us in, and I would feel delight in looking at the bright jewels of bottled vegetables in the pantry.
It was easy see this as dream antidote to all the rush of modern living, however, the bunnies in the hutches, so admired by the children were not for petting! The mangle would not have been gathering dust, and the potties under the bed, were not for potting plants.
We cycle back all down hill, to a warm kitchen where the cooker needs no stoking and the washing machine trundles, the dream evaporates and I am so glad I am home.

© 2008 spicyapplebum


Author's Note

spicyapplebum
this is just a writing exercise the title of which is I remember... written in twenty minutes!

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spicyapplebum
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Southampton, NH, United Kingdom



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I am a school librarian, which is great because I get all the holidays off! I love reading and writing and regularly get together with friends to write. (We meet every week!) We are following a couple.. more..

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