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A Poem by Heidi
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This isn't poetry in a traditional sense, but it's poetry nonetheless.

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Are you running?
No, I always walk fast.
Are you running?
No, I just had to jump over the crack.
Are you hiding?
No, my eyes just hurt.
Are you crying?
No, it must be raining.

© 2008 Heidi


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I enjoyed the unique question-answer style you wrote in, it grabbed my attention. This poem was interesting, in so few words you've managed to tell a story. Someone who is always lying to get out of showing their emotions, always hiding, this was a great poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Heidi
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Whag, I am just a person who overloads herself on things to do and people to love and goals in life. I'm still young but then not so young, in that though I want to go out and literally see the world.. more..

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