Snowflakes

They flitter and flutter in endless array
Teeming in gleaming and freezing display
Kids squint as they blink before wonder filled eyes
Moon lighting the icing of natures delights
Sledges await them to skate streets and fields
Snow balls and snow people; games that they yield
Impressions of Angels will show where some fall
Enchantment enabled by snowflakes cold call
When they fall upon all; a shower of mystique
A reflection of people in that each is unique

Reviews

[Rose Kavanagh]

Delightfully playful, yet it still has a message - like the snowflakes that fall, people are all unique. Really well written, I loved the flow and your choice of words made the piece all the more entertaining.

"Teeming in gleaming and freezing display" was an especially great line, in my opinion. Wonderful work! :)

[SoulofManyFaces]

This is beautiful, loved it! You captured something as simple
as a snowflake so gracefully. It's also playful and whimsical.
Great job!

[Leaner Pastures]

The alliteration on the second line can stand all on it's own as a definative poem about snowflakes. Layer in the rest of the verse, and I'm throwing out all attempts to write about snow and snowflakes as any further attempt will be futile. Nice Job.

[JustKeith]

I really like this! Well done!